⚡ TL;DR
A detailed guide to this IELTS Writing Task 2 essay type, with structure templates, useful vocabulary, and techniques to achieve Band 7+.
Originally published October 2017. Last reviewed 3 July 2026.
In this post, you will be able to view an essay example from a past student, with the corrections and feedback highlighted in red.
Most of the students studying for the IELTS Test have said they find the IELTS Writing Tasks difficult. I have corrected hundreds of task 1 and 2 essays on various topics, giving estimated band scores and detailed feedback. There are also suggestions on how to improve for a higher band score. Take a look at this student essay example and see how it compares to your own writing.
Writing Task 2 Question
“With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to view content, which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?”
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What Band 8 Means for Task 2
Band 8 in IELTS Writing Task 2 reflects strong competence across the four assessment criteria. Understanding these criteria helps you identify exactly what to improve.
Task Response at Band 8
The response addresses all parts of the task with a fully developed position supported by well-chosen, relevant ideas. Each main idea is extended and supported with specific evidence.
Coherence and Cohesion at Band 8
Ideas flow logically with skilful paragraphing and a wide range of cohesive devices used naturally.
How to Maintain Band 8
- Plan before writing: Spend 5 minutes outlining your position, main ideas, and supporting points.
- Polish your examples: Ensure every supporting point includes a specific, relevant example.
- Proofread: Reserve 2-3 minutes at the end to check for grammar errors, spelling mistakes, and unclear sentences.
- Practise under timed conditions: Write complete essays in 40 minutes to build speed and confidence.
Originally published on IELTS Achieve. Last reviewed 3 July 2026.