How To Write An Agree Or Disagree Essay

How To Write An Agree Or Disagree Essay

⚡ TL;DR

A detailed guide to this IELTS Writing Task 2 essay type, with structure templates, useful vocabulary, and techniques to achieve Band 7+.

Originally published December 2017. Last reviewed 3 July 2026.

In writing task 2 you will be asked to write a discursive essay (250 words minimum). You will be given a question asking you to give your opinion and discuss a problem or issue. You could also be asked to provide solutions, evaluate a problem, compare and contrast different ideas or challenge an idea. In this post, we will be focussing on how to write an agree/disagree/opinion essay.

One of the first things you should do is read the marking criteria to see what the examiners expect. This is really important, as you need to know what they are looking for in the band 7+ boxes. 

You should be able to give the examiners exactly what they want, in order to get a 7+ band score. 

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IELTS Writing Task 2 - How To Write An Agree-Disagree Essay

Writing Task 2 Agree/Disagree Essay Structure

The structure that I advise my students to use, will be sure to get you a band score of 7+. You need to practice using this structure, with as many questions as you can, before sitting your IELTS test. This writing task 2 structure has been proven to be successful for my students and when perfected, can easily help you to achieve a high band score. 

TIP >> Before you start writing, plan your ideas so that you can organise the information clearly. You must decide how much you agree or disagree and why. Take 5 minutes and plan out your ideas, opinions and examples. 

TIP >> It is very important that spend a full 40 minutes on this task as the score you get for writing task 2 is two-thirds of your total writing score. You also need to write a minimum of 250 words and use your own ideas. 

TIP >> Remember to write in a formal tone, this is an academic essay, and therefore your writing should be formal. 


IT IS A 4-PARAGRAPH STRUCTURE

Paragraph 1 – The Introduction

This is the introduction to the essay and where you should start off by paraphrasing the question. 

Do you understand what I mean, when I say ‘paraphrase’ the question?

This means that you rewrite the question in your own words using synonyms. You can’t just copy the question again or use the same words in the question. Paraphrase and show off your vocabulary knowledge by using synonyms. When practising your essay writing, use an online thesaurus to help you. This is a great tool and can help you to learn many new words.

Then your next sentence should give your view/opinion on the issue. A good way to say this is to start with…I agree…. or I disagree…… or In my opinion, I believe that…….. 

The third sentence in the introduction should outline for the examiner exactly what you will discuss in the main body paragraphs. For example, Firstly this essay will discuss……… Secondly, this essay will discuss…….

There are three sentences you need in the introduction >>

  • Paraphrase the question
  • Give your view/opinion
  • Outline the specific topics that will be discussed in the main body paragraphs.
IELTS Writing Task 2 - How To Write An Agree-Disagree Essay

Paragraph 2 – Main Body Paragraph 1

In this paragraph, you should write about your first main idea (opinion A) that supports your opinion on the issue from the question. You should give specific information and only write about one main idea in each main body paragraph. 

Start the paragraph by introducing the topic. This is where you need to have a topic sentence. The next sentence(s) should explain the topic, going into detail. The third sentence should give an example that supports the view.

The example you give could be something from your own experience or made up – it is ok to make up something as the examiners will not fact check your information. They want to see your ability to use English at a certain level. You could make up an example from a report, journal, newspaper or University study to support your view. 

This is how the paragraph should look >>

  • Introduce the topic (topic sentence – opinion A)
  • Explain/give detail
  • Example

Paragraph 3 – Main Body Paragraph 2

In this paragraph, you should write about your second main idea (opinion B) that supports your opinion on the issue from the question. You should give specific information and only write about one main idea in each main body paragraph. 

Start the paragraph by introducing the topic. This is where you need to have a topic sentence. The next sentence(s) should explain the topic, going into detail. The third sentence should give an example that supports the view.

The example you give could be something from your own experience or made up – it is ok to make up something as the examiners will not fact check your information. They want to see your ability to use English at a certain level. You could make up an example from a report, journal, newspaper or University study to support your view. 

This is how the paragraph should look >>

  • Introduce the topic (topic sentence- opinion B)
  • Explain/give detail
  • Example

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IELTS Writing Task 2 - How To Write An Agree-Disagree Essay

Paragraph 4 – The Conclusion

In the fourth paragraph, you write the conclusion giving a summary of your main points and restate your opinion/views and justify them. You should not enter any new information or ideas in this paragraph. 

  • Summary of the main points
  • Restate own views/opinion/justify

Expressing your opinion

To get a high score in IELTS academic writing task 2, you should use as many different structures, collocations and idioms as you can.  


Sequencing ideas

You can use phrases like these to make statements, for example; On the one hand sunbathing can give your body vitamin D, on the other hand, it can also be very dangerous for your health. 


Sample Agree/Disagree essay

**All questions have been reported by students who have taken the IELTS exam.**

Obesity has become a huge concern as an increasing percentage of the population have become overweight and this has put a tremendous strain on the healthcare authorities, leading to increased costs. One solution that is being implemented is the introduction of more sports lessons in the school curriculum. In my opinion, I strongly agree that the integration of active lessons will greatly assist in kerbing obesity. Firstly, this essay will discuss how sports lessons will increase awareness of the benefits of having a healthy lifestyle. Secondly, this essay will discuss, the importance of combining exercise with a healthy diet.

On the one hand, I believe that the best way to fight health care problems is by utilising health education. By integrating physical education classes into the curriculum, impressionable young children and adults will be exposed to healthy lifestyle practices of sport and exercise, whereas they will also learn about teamwork and see their self-confidence grow. For example, at Westminster primary school in the UK, 10-minute exercise intervals were introduced between classes. The children must run laps around the playground before going to their next lesson. This formed part of a study by Cambridge University, where it reported that 85% of the children performed better on tests and obesity records were at an all-time low.  

On the other hand, in my view having more physical education classes in the curriculum is not the only way to teach young people how to have a healthy lifestyle. The children should be educated how to balance exercise with a healthy diet, so that this could extend, not only to the students in the schools but also to the parents. For instance, the NHS in the UK regularly hold talks in schools for both parents and students to educate communities on how to have a balanced diet. They also promote proper exercise, involvement in sports, and having an active lifestyle. As a result of this program, in some areas, they saw a decrease in the number of overweight health issues.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that having more sports lessons in schools will help to fight the growing number of overweight people. By combining this with a healthy diet, the students will be encouraged to be healthy, from a young age, right through into adulthood.

(Word Count = 385 / Band Score 9)


Feedback
  • Task Achievement – The answer provides a paraphrased question, to begin with, followed by a clear opinion. The opinion is fully supported in the main body paragraphs in the essay, with fully extended and well-supported ideas
  • Coherence and Cohesion – The answer has been divided into clear logical paragraphs and each main body paragraph only has one main idea. There are cohesive links between the main body paragraphs and between most sentences.    
  • Lexical Resource – There is evidence of a wide range of vocabulary, with no errors in the text.
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy – The answer has no grammatical errors. The sentences have a wide range of structures. 

TIP >> Remember to give your opinion, state your opinion in the introduction clearly and develop your main body paragraphs around it. Use each of the main body paragraphs to support your opinion, giving examples that are relevant. In the conclusion, summarise your main points and restate your opinion. 


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How To Understand Any Type Of Writing Task 2 Question

⚡ TL;DR

A detailed guide to this IELTS Writing Task 2 essay type, with structure templates, useful vocabulary, and techniques to achieve Band 7+.

Originally published December 2017. Last reviewed 3 July 2026.

how to understand any type of IELTS writing task 2 question

In this post, you will learn how to understand any type of writing task 2 question. There are various types of task 2 questions and some students do not always understand what the question is asking them to do. 

The examiner wants to see that you have clearly understood the question and written an easy to follow essay for them to read, with relevant information and specific examples. 


Question Analysis

You need to start by reading the question and analysing it >

  • What type of essay is it?

Is it an opinion essay, agree/disagree, advantages/disadvantages, discussion, cause and effect, problem solution etc? You need to identify what type of question it is so that you can think about the structure you are going to use to write your essay. This will also help you to understand the question when you know the type of ideas and opinions you should be thinking about.

  • What is the main issue?

You need to read the question and pinpoint the main issue. The main issue is often linked to a sub-issue. You need to look at this to make sure you stay focused and don’t write generally about the topic. Stay on task and make sure that all of the information written in your essay is relevant.

  • What are the sub-issues?

The sub-issues are words that tell you more about the topic and the areas you need to discuss. 

  • What instructions are you given?

The instruction words are the words that are giving you a command, asking you a question that you should answer in your essay. For example – to what extent do you agree? or discuss both views and give your opinion.


Question Example 1

Look at this example Task 2 question below >

Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be overcome?

  • What type of essay is it? > problem/solution
  • What is the main issue? > work/life balance
  • What are the sub-issues? > many people find it hard
  • What instructions are you given? > What are the reasons for this? / How can this problem be overcome?

You can see here that the question is a problem/solution essay. The main issue is looking at work-life balance with the sub-issue being that many people find it hard to have a work-life balance. If you discussed the benefits of working more or working while you are away from work, then you would not be answering the question. Next, you should look at the instruction words, that are asking you – what are the reasons for this? and how can this problem be overcome? give relevant answers that answer this specifically. 


Question Example 2

Look at this example Task 2 question below >

The maintenance of public libraries is a waste of money because of computer technologies which have the same function.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  • What type of essay is it? > agree/disagree
  • What is the main issue? > money (wasted) being used to maintain the libraries
  • What are the sub-issues? > computer technologies can easily do this.
  • What instructions are you given? > To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You can see here that the question is an agree/disagree essay. The main issue is looking at money, being wasted on maintaining public libraries with the sub-issue being that computer technologies exist that can do that job. If you discussed the need for public libraries in society or the rate at which this type of technology is growing, then you would not be answering the question. You should think about which side of the argument you side with more, then make that the focus of your answer. Next, you should look at the instruction words, that are asking you – To what extent do you agree or disagree? give relevant answers that answer this specifically. 


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How To Write An Agree Or Disagree Essay

Book List To Help You With IELTS Preparation

⚡ TL;DR

Comprehensive guide covering essential IELTS preparation strategies and techniques to help you achieve your target band score.

Originally published December 2017. Last reviewed 3 July 2026.

IELTS preparation book list

During your IELTS preparation, many of you will use free resources online, but there are also many books that are worth the investment. Even your IELTS teachers and examiners have some of these books and have studied them, in order to know everything they can about the IELTS Test. 

The one book that is worth getting (if you choose only one) is The Official Guide to IELTS Student’s book with Answers. This book has everything covered, with many helpful hints and tips, and it also includes practice tests and answers. If you want to get extra help with your vocabulary and grammar, then Cambridge English offer specific books each with a focus in these areas. There are so many books out there to choose from and in our experience, the books from Cambridge English are excellent. 

Here is a book list to help you with your IELTS preparation >>

**All books were sourced on Amazon.co.uk**


The Official Cambridge Guide to IELTS Student's Book with Answers with DVD-ROM (Cambridge English)

The Official Cambridge Guide to IELTS Student’s Book with Answers with DVD-ROM (Cambridge English)

By Pauline Cullen, Amanda French, Vanessa Jakeman

The Official Cambridge Guide to IELTS is THE definitive guide to IELTS. It contains all you need to succeed in the exam. Skill-building exercises cover all of the question types in the exam for both the General Training and Academic Modules. Our research into real IELTS candidates’ exam answers – and the mistakes they make helps you avoid the same ones!

Eight official practice tests and a focus on test-taking strategy help you maximise your score. Videos of the Speaking test, and all the listening material, including the tests, can be found on the DVD-ROM or downloaded via an accompanying App from iTunes or Google Play. IELTS is jointly managed by the British Council, IDP: IELTS Australia and Cambridge English Language Assessment.      


Cambridge IELTS 12 Academic Student's Book with Answers: Authentic Examination Papers (IELTS Practice Tests)

Cambridge IELTS 12 Academic Student’s Book with Answers: Authentic Examination Papers (IELTS Practice Tests)

By Authentic Examination Papers

Cambridge IELTS 12 contains four authentic IELTS examination papers from Cambridge English Language Assessment, providing excellent exam practice. The Student’s Book with answers allows students to familiarise themselves with IELTS and to practise examination techniques using authentic tests. It contains four complete tests for Academic candidates.

An introduction to these modules is included in the book, together with an explanation of the scoring system used by Cambridge English Language Assessment. There is a comprehensive section of answers and tapescripts at the back of the book. Audio CDs containing the material for the Listening Tests, and a Student’s Book with answers with downloadable Audio are sold separately. These tests are also available as IELTS Academic Tests 5-8 on Testbank.org.uk


Cambridge Vocabulary for IELTS Advanced Band 6.5+ with Answers and Audio CD (Cambridge English)

Cambridge Vocabulary for IELTS Advanced Band 6.5+ with Answers and Audio CD (Cambridge English)

By Pauline Cullen

The book covers all the vocabulary needed by students aiming for band 6.5 and above in the IELTS tests and provides students with practice of exam tasks from each paper. Cambridge Vocabulary for IELTS Advanced focuses on moving students to 6.5 and beyond by working on vocabulary-building strategies necessary for success at advanced levels.

It includes useful tips on how to approach IELTS exam tasks and covers especially tricky areas such as paraphrase and collocation. It is informed by the Cambridge English Corpus to ensure that the vocabulary is presented in genuine contexts and includes real learner errors. The Audio CD contains the listening and pronunciation exercises from each unit. The material is suitable for self-study or homework tasks, and may also be used in class with the teacher.


Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Student's Book with Answers and Audio CD (Cambridge Grammar for First Certificate, Ielts, Pet)

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Student’s Book with Answers and Audio CD (Cambridge Grammar for First Certificate, Ielts, Pet)

By Diane Hopkins

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS provides complete coverage of the grammar needed for the IELTS test, and develops listening skills at the same time. It includes a wide range of IELTS tasks from the Academic and General Training Reading, Writing and Listening modules, and contains helpful grammar explanations and a grammar glossary. A Student’s Book ‘without answers’ is also available.


Collins Writing for IELTS has been specially created for learners of English who plan to take the Academic IELTS exam to demonstrate that they have the required ability to communicate effectively in English at university.

It is ideal for learners with band score 5 – 5.5 who are aiming for band score 6 or higher on the IELTS test (CEF level B1 and above). Collins Writing for IELTS concentrates on the Academic paper.


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How To Write An Agree Or Disagree Essay

How To Get A Band Score 7+ in IELTS Writing Task 2?

⚡ TL;DR

A detailed guide to this IELTS Writing Task 2 essay type, with structure templates, useful vocabulary, and techniques to achieve Band 7+.

Originally published December 2017. Last reviewed 3 July 2026.

How to get a band score 7 or above in the academic IELTS test

In this post, I want to share with you hints, tips, do’s and don’ts that will lead you to a band score of 7 or above on the Academic test. It is not an easy thing to do, as many of you probably know already!

It takes determination and motivation to study hard around work, family and any other commitments you may have. 

Take a look at how you can try to get the best results possible in the IELTS exam:

Make a study plan

There are many ways in which you can prepare for your IELTS test, one way to start is to make a study plan. Focus on any weaknesses you may have and practice, getting a teacher to correct any essays or practice the speaking test with you. Many of the students I have taught who have scored a 7 or above have admitted to having studied for at least one hour per day. 

Below is an example of a study plan, with each area of the exam covered. If you know that your main weakness is writing, spend more time on that – making sure you have an IELTS teacher correcting your work and giving you feedback. If you need to focus on vocabulary, practice and read as much as you can, especially for the Academic students who need to learn how to describe statistical trends. 

Make your own study plan! Think about the following questions;

  • When is your exam?
  • How much time do you have to study each day or each week?
  • What areas do you need to focus on the most? 
 IELTS study plan

IELTS Writing Tips

Most students struggle with the writing test and require a lot of practice before test day. Read the writing task 1 and 2 posts on this website and study the different structures needed for different types of questions. Remember the following;

TIP 1: Read the question properly

Make sure you read it a few times and highlight any keywords. What is the question asking you to do? Do you have to give your opinion or not? 

TIP 2: Make a plan before you start writing your essay.

Learn the structures needed and plan accordingly in your exam. Take a few minutes to do this, so you can easily write your essay, including all of the things you need. 

TIP 3: Remember your essay structure

In writing task 2 remember how to structure the essay so that it becomes planted into your brain! Include an introduction, main body paragraph 1, main body paragraph 2 and a conclusion (this may change depending on the type of question, but this structure is the basic skeleton). 

TIP 4: Don’t overthink it

if you have ideas that are quite simple, that is fine. They don’t have to be really deep and complex to get a high band score. For example – if asked to give reasons why so many people are obese these days – one reason is overeating easily available calorie-rich junk food. Think about what you know about the subject/topic and go from there. Have you read anything about it? or seen anything on the news or in a documentary? I remember watching a documentary about the top 20 most obese countries once. So I could use that as one of my examples. I also remember reading about how the costs are inflating the healthcare system and more of taxpayers money is being spent on that, rather on public services. So that could be another example to use in my essay. The point is that all examples should be relevant to the question, even if they are simple. 

TIP 5: Vocabulary

Make sure you are using the right vocabulary in your essay. You might try to boast and show the examiner how many high-level words you know, which is fine if you know for sure that they fit into the sentence and have the right meaning. 

TIP 6: Give your opinion when asked

in the essay or in the speaking test, when asked for your opinion, give it clearly. Use phrases like, in my opinion, in my view, I think that, I believe that…. and then explain. 

TIP 7: Use cohesive devices

this can get you high marks when used in the writing and speaking test. Don’t overdo it though! Overuse of these words can be a sure way to lose you marks. Words like – however, therefore, furthermore, in other words, for example, for instance, etc. 

Cohesive devices for IELTS

Planning for the big day!

When preparing for the day of the test, you should try to get there well on time. You must bring the same passport or ID card that you used on your application form. You also need to bring a pen, pencil and an eraser. You will not be allowed to take any electronic devices or a dictionary into the test area. 

On the night before the test, read some English texts, similar to those you may read in the exam, for example, some opinion pieces from a newspaper. The Academic students could analyse graphs and charts as well or read over past assignments that have been corrected. 

Things to do: You should also do the following:

  • Give yourself time to check over your work before the exam ends. 
  • Highlight any keywords or numbers on the question paper.
  • Make notes on the question paper before you begin to write. 
  • Always write in full sentences (no bullet points or unfinished sentences).
  • Paraphrase! Make sure you paraphrase the question.
  • Link your ideas together in writing task 2.
  • Support with relevant examples.
  • Read the question properly.

Things not to do: And please don’t:

  • Use informal language
  • Repeat the sentences written on the exam paper
  • Spend more than 20 minutes on task 1
  • Overuse those linking words/cohesive devices – moreover, however, nowadays etc.
IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 – Charts And Graphs

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 – Charts And Graphs

⚡ TL;DR

Step-by-step guide to answering this type of IELTS Writing Task 1 question. Covers structure, key language, and band-scoring criteria.

Originally published May 2017. Last reviewed 3 July 2026.

In writing task 1, you may be asked to write about a chart, line graph, table or proportional bar chart. 

There is a number of practice questions out there for you to try and perfect your answers in preparation for the Academic IELTS test. In this post, we will be looking at line graphs, bar charts, pie charts, useful vocabulary and describing changes over time. 

Here are a few examples below of the graphs or charts you may see >>

You need to able to report neutrally on the visual information presented to you. You should not include any opinion on the data, only report the data and trends that you can see.  

It is a good idea to spend a minute or two looking at your chart/graph and circling/highlighting any information that is important.

For example, think about the following questions >> 

  • What is being measured and how?
  • Is it in percentages? Millions? Degrees? (for the temperature)
  • Then think about the timing – is it over the period of one year? Five? or Ten?
  • Can you make any comparisons

The Essay Structure >>

Paragraph 1 – Paraphrase the question

When writing your own introduction of one or two sentences paraphrase the question and add detail. 

Paragraph 2 – Overview of the main features

You need to be able to give a broad summary of the information. This is best started with – Overall……. then giving details of the main features you can see. You can write this in one or two sentences, which describe the main features of the information that is presented in the chart or graph.

Paragraph 3 – Specific details of first main feature

Write about the specific details that you can see – looking closely at the first main feature and including data/stats and trends. Make any comparisons if relevant. 

Paragraph 4 – Specific details of second main feature

Write about the specific details that you can see – looking closely at the second main feature and including data/stats and trends. Make any comparisons if relevant.

TIP >> You will be marked on the type of information you write about, as well as the language you use. You need to make sure the information you write down is accurate. If it is not, then your score will be lower. 

TIP >> Leave time at the end to check your work – you need to make sure there are minimal errors in the writing (the language) and that you have accurate data.


Here are some words and phrases that you can use in task 1 >>

These words and phrases can be used to describe the information in a formal academic way. Here are some examples of how they might be used >>

  • The number of people who have higher-level qualifications is the same as the number who have no qualifications.
  • While students read every type of textbook, no students read any magazines.
  • With regards to medical journals, there is no significant difference between the reading habits of nurses and doctors. 
  • The number of nurses (30) who read medical journals is much smaller than the number of doctors (70).
  • There is only a slight difference in the number of nurses and doctors who read monthly medical journals.

Here is a list of words and phrases that you can use in your essay, to show intensity, reporting phrases and categorising words >>

TIP >> During the exam, students can make notes on the question paper, which is separate from the answer sheet. The examiner does not see these notes. You can circle words or make notes to help you write your essay.

TIP>> Using the word respectively can be useful when writing your task 1 essay. This is a high-level vocabulary word, used to indicate the order in which information is given.


Describing Changes Over Time >>

The list of verbs and adjectives below are useful for describing changes over time, they should be used objectively to describe obvious changes that you can see. For example;

  • The number of people who read medical journals decreased in 1999.
  • The number of people who applied to medical school fluctuated from 2005 – 2007.
  • The number of people who graduated medical school peaked in 2010.
  • The number of students attending biology class remained steady during the period of 1999, with a sudden decline in 2001.

These adverbs and periods of time can also help you to describe the information you are writing about, for example;

  • The number of students who attended medical courses in 1999 gradually increased from 20,000 to 60,000.
  • Over the period of the study from 1990 to 1999 there was suddenly a sharp decline in the number of library books returned by students. 

Writing Task 1 Charts and Graphs Sample Essays >>

Here are three sample essay questions and answers for you to look at. Review the language used, the essay structure, the information gathered and how they were written. In all of these questions, the minimum word count is 150 words.              


Sample Line Graph Essay 

The graph illustrates comparative statistics on the number of burglaries in four countries (Great Britain, Greece, Spain and Norway) over a 10-year period (2000-2009).  The units of thefts were measured in thousands.

Overall, the highest recurrence of burglary was in Great Britain, which was fairly high from 2000-2009 in comparison to the other countries, while the lowest incidence when the study began in 2000 was in Spain. It can be seen that in 2009 Spain reported slightly lower figures than the other four countries.  

The graph shows that Great Britain’s burglaries were consistently high, never below the 20,000 mark, though the trend fluctuates over the 10-year period.  According to the data, the country experienced the highest number of thefts during 2002 (20,000) and 2006 (20,000). However, it experienced its lowest amount stolen in 2009 at approximately 15,000. 

Similarly, Spain experienced fluctuating trends, but on the opposite side of the spectrum as it reported the least amount of burglaries in 2000 (6,000) with frequency varying over the years and finally reporting a decline in 2009 (4,000). However, other notable statistics are Greece’s upward trend in the number of burglaries, which started in 2000 (8,000) and finally peaked at 14,000 during 2009.  Norway is also noteworthy for having considerably low thefts over the course of 10 years compared to the other countries, dropping sharply in 2003, but increasing slightly from there, finally peaking at 6,000 slightly higher than Spain.

(Word Count = 237 / Band Score 9)


Feedback
  • Task Achievement – The answer provides a paraphrased question, to begin with, followed by an overview that gives the reader key information.    
  • Coherence and Cohesion – The answer has been divided into clear logical paragraphs.      
  • Lexical Resource – There is evidence of paraphrasing, synonyms and some less common words (fluctuating, spectrum). 
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy – The answer has no grammatical errors. The sentences are mainly made up of multiple clauses and have a variety of structures. 

TIP >> Remember to identify two or three main features and write about those. You don’t need to write about everything you see in order to gain a high band score.  


Sample Bar Chart Essay

The bar chart displays the estimated fuel consumption and cost per mile of some vehicles. Therefore, this report explains the relevant data of the diagram and the differences among the fuel costs for each type of vehicle.

Overall, there is a significant difference between the Range Rover and Smart Car fuel consumption; the chart also shows that the Smart Car is the lowest fuel consumer of all the vehicles. However, there is a common pattern in the increase of the cost and the miles travelled, from all of the vehicles. 

On the one hand, the cars with low fuel consumption include the following; Smart Car (approx. £5/10 miles), Ford KA (approx. £6/10 miles) and the Nissan Micra (approx. £7/10 miles). The Range Rover uses a high level of fuel in comparison to the Smart Car, using three times the amount at £20/10 miles.

On the other hand, the exception to this general trend is the variation of the cost of the Range Rover and Audi A6 from the rest of the vehicles at nearly £20/10 miles and £15/10 miles respectively. In addition, the BMW M3 also uses £15/ 10 miles, while the Mini Cooper consumes at least £5 less for travelling 10 miles at £10. 

Finally, this bar chart illustrates an exponential increase in the cost of fuel consumption of all the luxurious vehicles, with an exception for those, which are smaller, more environmentally friendly and essential for everyday use, such as the Smart Car, Ford KA and the Nissan Micra. 

(Word Count = 252 Band Score 9)


Feedback
  • Task Achievement – The answer provides a paraphrased question, to begin with, followed by an overview that gives the reader key information. This shows a fully developed response.   
  • Coherence and Cohesion – The answer has been divided into clear logical paragraphs. Linking words have been used to skilfully guide the reader through the information given (overall, one the one hand, on the other hand, finally).      
  • Lexical Resource – There is evidence of paraphrasing, synonyms and some less common words. 
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy – The answer has no grammatical errors. The sentences are mainly made up of multiple clauses and have a variety of structures. 

TIP >> Remember to identify two or three main features and write about those. You don’t need to write about everything you see in order to gain a high band score.  

TIP >> Look for the highs/lows /increases/decreases and any comparisons you can see. Write about one main idea in each main body paragraph


Pie Chart Sample Essay 

The pie charts illustrate the outcome of the survey conducted to a hundred visitors to Luton airport in order to evaluate their customer service, in 2010 and 2015.

Overall, it can be seen that a lot of people were satisfied by the services offered in 2010, but there was also a large number who thought the services given were poor. However, after 5 years, this trend changed. It shows that many found the services to be both good and excellent, with a decline in the number of people who were unsatisfied.

To begin with, in the year 2010, 45% of the respondents found the airport services satisfactory and exactly 14% rated it as good, while 5% considered the services excellent. Nevertheless, it also shows that the visitors rated it as poor and more so, very poor with 21% and 15%, respectively.

Over the 5-year period, the trend showed an improved airport service in 2015, wherein 39% of the visitors thought that services were good. Moreover, exactly 28% of the respondents answered that they received an excellent service while more than 15% said it was satisfactory. Lastly, we can observe that around 10% rated the services poor and very poor in comparison to the 2010 survey.  

(Word Count = 205 Band Score 9)


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  • Task Achievement – The answer provides a paraphrased question, to begin with, followed by an overview that gives the reader key information.  The information selected is relevant.  
  • Coherence and Cohesion – The answer has been divided into clear logical paragraphs.      
  • Lexical Resource – There is evidence of paraphrasing, synonyms and some less common words.
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy – The answer has no grammatical errors. The sentences are mainly made up of multiple clauses and have a variety of structures. 

TIP >> Remember to identify two or three main features and write about those. You don’t need to write about everything you see in order to gain a high band score.

TIP >> When comparing two charts, look for the key trends


Writing Task 1 Band Score 9 Criteria >>


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