IELTS writing task 2 student essay with corrections and feedback band score 7

In this post, you will be able to view an essay example from a past student, with the corrections and feedback highlighted in red. 

Most of the students studying for the IELTS Test have said they find the IELTS Writing Tasks difficult. I have corrected hundreds of task 1 and 2 essays on various topics, giving estimated band scores and detailed feedback. There are also suggestions on how to improve for a higher band score. Take a look at this student essay example and see how it compares to your own writing.

Writing Task 2 Question

“Climate change has become one of the most pressing issues that face humanity. What are the causes of climate change and what effects are expected to arise if it remains unchecked?”

Here is the task 2 essay with corrections, suggestions, feedback and an estimated band score:

 task 2 essay with corrections, suggestions, feedback and an estimated band score
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